This entry is for constructive criticism of my portrayal of Gokudera Hayato.
As this is my first time playing him from canon, I would appreciate any comments on what I'm doing right/wrong as well as advice on how to make him better.
This entry will stay at the top of Gokudera's journal. Comments are screened.
Gokudera Hayato
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dinamitardo- December 10th, 2015
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- dinamitardo
- October 18th, 2009
concerned
What the hell is up with this damn house now? I swear there are things coming out of the walls where it's dark and there are all sorts of weird monsters. I even tried a damn exorcism on the things, but I think it just made them angrier; something took a chunk out of my shoulder and it's not healing. At least it's stop bleeding for now.
I keep getting chased by this damn thing with a fucking pyramid on it's head too. I think the bastard's trying to kill me!!
How many of the Vongola are still here? People keep leaving and coming back, tch. As right-hand-man I should take responsibility of looking over everyone, so I'm taking a roll-call now! None of you better have died and shamed the Tenth!!!!
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- dinamitardo
- October 2nd, 2009
discontent
The house clearly isn't happy fucking killing us off. It wants to destroy itself too. It's a fucking mess everywhere thanks to the hail and the fucking fireballs yesterday. There's a huge fucking hole in wall and I'm sure I can see through the top of the house too. I nearly lost my damn arm to one of them... ugh.
And now?! On the best of days bugs are disgusting, but this is just pushing it. They've cleared out most of the fucking kitchen. Tonks, you don't happen to still have that stash of food and alcohol do you? It'd come in handy right about now.
At least I'm in one piece and my body doesn't feel like it's detroying itself from the inside out. Oi, Yamamoto, Stupid Cow, Lawn Head... anyone else who's actually still here; you guys okay? You guys alive?
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- dinamitardo
- September 29th, 2009
- sick
[Gokudera barely manages to lift his wrist to switch the device there on, but when he does there's a low groan and laboured breathing. When he speaks, his voice is weak and shaky.]
This biblical plague shit has gone too far. Hasn't the fucking house already proven it can play God? If it keeps going we still have boils, hail and fire, locusts, darkness and death of the firstborn...
[There's the sound of harsh coughs and spitting and then another groan.]
Tch. Fuck. I think this might actually kill me... Fucking house...
[The recording cuts off.]
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- dinamitardo
- September 9th, 2009
bitchy
The first person who wishes me happy birthday will get a stick of dynamite stuck in a very uncomfortable place.
Has anyone seen Juudaime around? I haven't seen him in some time now...
Just like everyone else I don't like the House's silence... probably means it's going to drop something serious on us. Ugh, fucking wonderful.
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- dinamitardo
- August 16th, 2009
- pissed off
[After discovering that the two times he's exploded that morning were linked to his anger, he decides to instead make a calm voice entry. It's clear that he's trying to stay calm by the shaking of his voice and how he keeps stopping to take a breath.]
This is pathetic.
Takeshi... Tonks... I need to talk to the two of you...
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- dinamitardo
- August 10th, 2009
scared
[Gokudera wakes up, sits up, glances around the room and then proceeds to panic before clambering back under the sheets, knocking his wrist against the headboard and receiving a small shock as the device switches on.]
I th-think I'm just going to stay here today...
{ooc-this week Dera's going to be timid and panicky with random outbursts of happy and wanting to be social~}
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- dinamitardo
- July 8th, 2009
confused
[Gokudera doesn't remember this place when he wakes up in the huge four poster bed. In fact, the only thing he can think is that this is another of Byakuran's tricks. This couldn't be the damn battleground for 'Choice', could it?
Standing up, he checks that he hasn't been tampered with and he still has all his rings and boxes and a plentiful supply of dynamite. He doesn't know what the device on his wrist is, but satisfied that his weapons are all there, he heads to the open door and glances down the corridor. For a moment, there's nothing and then at the end of the corridor he spots fast approaching flames attached to a troupe of Millefiore Black Spell.
Moving into action quickly, he lights the flame on his Vongola ring and opens two of the boxes around his waist, knocking the device around his wrist on, before firing in the enemies direction, taking them down in a couple fo hits.]
Tch, after that Gamma bastard, you guys are too easy.
[He turns to head in the opposite direction and finds the way blocked by strange looking creatures he'd never seen before. It doesn't take him a second to assess the situation and open yet another box, blasting the monsters. When they don't die after the first shot,he fires again but it seems to have no effect. He curses softly and decides to run before they attack him; he could figure out what the hell to do then. He needed to find Tsuna and the others anyway.]
What the hell are these things?! Is this Byakuran's damn 'Choice' game?! Juudaime, Yamamoto, anyone else here? Are you safe?
{ooc-Gokudera doesn't remember being in the house and probably won't for a day or so; just so I can mess with him some~}
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- dinamitardo
- June 30th, 2009
[Waking up on the grass to bright sun was not Gokudera's idea of a good time. So as soon as he'd realised the house had gone - with a little help from the announcement - he heads into the woods at the rear of the grounds for some shade. He doesn't go far in, but he finds himself a small clearing and plops down at the bottom of a tree, lighting a cigarette and taking a long drag. He makes sure his device recording is switched off and commences muttering to himself around the cigarette.]
This is fucking pathetic. I bet the fucking hosts are laughing their asses off at us right now... assholes.
{ooc-just a quick note to say that this post is mostly for Gokudera, Yamamoto, Xanxus and Squalo. If anyone else wants to bump into Gokudera, then please do; it would just be before Xanxus shows up is all. He needs to meet a few more people/get to know the people he's met better anyway~}
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- dinamitardo
- June 23rd, 2009
blah
I suppose this isn't half as bad as what we've had to put up with lately, and if it was, there's an excess of alcohol to make it better.Then again, after my display last time the house had one of these parties and I had a lot to drink...Not like I actually have to go down to the party anyway, I could just stay in the house all week... Though now my cold's gone getting out sounds good.
Juudaime, if you need any help this week or you want someone to accompany you to the party, don't hesitate to ask me! I'm sure no-one here would be stupid enough to attack you, but we can never be too careful!
[strike hackable. Oh, and Gokudera has been given this by the house~]
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- dinamitardo
- June 4th, 2009
- hot
This fucking weather is driving me crazy. The snow left me with a fucking cold, the rain made it worseI'm pretty sure I might have gotten frostbite too. The wind wasn't much better, but at least it wasn't freezing all the damn time.
The heat though? Ugh. I have a fever already, I feel ill enough. And now it's just too hot to even attempt to cool down.
Juudaime, you're alright aren't you? I'm sorry I've gotten ill, I'll try to get better fast!Takeshi... bring me a lot of ice...
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- dinamitardo
- May 24th, 2009
- fucking freezing
Fucking snow? Ugh, didn't we have enough of this at Christmas time? There's already so much of it too...
Juudaime, if you need extra sheets, you can have mine!!I'll probably be staying with Yamamoto...
Well, the house at least didn't take away the clothes it gave us before, so I won't be freezing in the shorts it gave me.
Oi! Since you're always prepared for the crazy shit like this, I don't suppose you've managed to magically prepare something for this, Tonks?Maybe we'd be able to have a snowball fight like we did in Namimori way back before all the fighting, I think that would be nice... Fuck, nice?! What the hell is up with me?
[ooc-First strike easily hacked, second and small only hackable by friends. Also, as a note to anyone who hasn't caught on, Gokudera was a little shook up by what Joshua said to him school week and still kinda is~]
- ooc-o hay der meme!
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- dinamitardo
- May 19th, 2009
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- dinamitardo
- May 17th, 2009
drunk
[The device clicks on and there's some slurred grumbling and then a groan.]
Fuck... this stuff is so strong. Thank fuck those exams are over...
Ugh... my stomach hurts.
[ooc-drunk Gokudera is drunk. Feel free to bother him in room 204~]
- ooc-whatever happened to meme day anyway?
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- dinamitardo
- May 8th, 2009
amused
( Ohgod, lol )
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- dinamitardo
- May 6th, 2009
[Gokudera's math tutoring session is currently running in class A usual room. Anyone from class A may join in an action tag!]
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- dinamitardo
- May 5th, 2009
- annoyed
Since Juudaime ordered that I do it, anyone in Class A that requires tutoring for math can find me in room 204!
And if anyone would like me to, I suppose I can hold some sort of a class tomorrow while there are no classes on...
[ooc-please note that despite the fact the character I play is a bit of a genius... I am not good at math outside of adding, subtracting, multiplying and dividing. So any explainations given by Gokudera will likely be a case of 'THIS IS HOW YOU DO IT ~SCRIBBLES ON BOARD~'.]
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- dinamitardo
- May 3rd, 2009
bored
Class assignments showed up a little while ago. Juudaime! We're in the same class. Yamamoto and Lawn Head too.
Math looks like it will be interesting. I'm looking forward to tomorrow, Teacher.
The rest should be fine but... PE with that asshole?After what he fucking did!!
( ooc-timetable for my useless brain )
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- dinamitardo
- May 2nd, 2009
productive
School? Hah! Compared to everything else this damn place has thrown at us, school is nothing. Even if it is over a twelve hour day. It's a rather welcome change from all the crazy shit that's happened. Can't say I'm happy about all the classes though.
Juudaime, Yamamoto! If you need any help studying, you know where I am!
I suppose since we have to join a club, I'll see about playing piano for the Chamber Orchestra. Nothing else sounds appealing, and after the shit the house has used as punishment before, I'd rather not have to deal with whatever.
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- dinamitardo
- April 25th, 2009
- blah
Oi, Takeshi. Happybelatedbirthday.
Juudaime, Tonks, you don't need to worry anymore. Things are better now.
[small entry is small because I'm on a short semi-hiatus/avoiding the internet type thing.]
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